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Ratings?

Agreed, the chances of having 4 relatives here is very slim

Stickied as this is an activs case

Denied, you only picked out ONE good thing about the game, a review isn't about crtizising all the way through its about saying why its good.

Re apply 5th March

royal king may be returning. He will be starting out from scratch. I don't want to see any insults aimed at him which is considered flaming. If I see anyone flaming with him they will receive a warning no matter what they're rank is. If they continue theh will revive a 1 week spell in pow.

Do I make myself clear?

637.....

 It was a misty night as I looked out my window, it seemed like the night was calm,but misty. Through the mist I could see, or at least I thought I could see, a small flicker of a flame, what was happening among all that mist, what mysterious fire could there possibly be? What? What was lurking out there? There was only one way to find out.

As I awoke the next morning, I felt the wind breeze into my face. Once I was ready for the day ahead, my family and I walked out the door, but as soon as we did so, a huge outburst of what seemed to be fear came among us! What was happening? We (or rather I) was about to find out.

We began to cautiously stroll around the outside of the forest where the devestating cry had come from.

All of a sudden, we heard yet another outburst from the same area, this was getting far too suspicious now, I had to know who was making them and why! When my family weren't looking, I darted into the forest.

As soon as I ventured deep into the forest, I remembered the rumors, according to them, no one had ever survived in there! I could see where all those people had gone. On the floor, they lay there as lifeless skeletons. Woukd the same fate await me? This was getting far too freaky now, I took a glance at my surrounding but there was no sign of life, was I the only one here? The lone survivor?

I wandered around the deadly forest more when I heard a deep voice coming from the bushes, I instantly leapt to my guard as the rustling grew louder and louder, who was hiding among the bushes? As the sound reached it's ultimate peak, a man, in his mid thirties from what I could tell came stumbling out muttering curses under his breath.

When he noticed me, he got a fright when he examined my height wondering why
I was here which he did eventually ask.
"Hey kid, what are you doing in this forest, haven't you heard the rumors?" Of course I had to be honest so I replied saying I dashed here after I heard an uproar of fear.
"Not the smartest move kid." I could tell by the deep tone in his voice he was less than impressed.

"You look like you could do with a hand, follow me." He beckoned me over to what seemed to be a survival camp, it was obviously well built I told him.
"Thanks, it took a few months, yeah I've been here that lo......." A gunshot came from the distance and a bullet darted straight through my new guide's face!

He was gone, along with all those others. I dashed through the woods ducking and leaping, over and under. If I stopped, I would go down with him. Ten minutes of action and I had entered a open patch of land. I studied my surroundings, I caught a glimpse of light! This was it! After weeks in the woods, my family awaited me.

I darted out the woods, I was facinated at the sound of the cars go by! I crouched on the pavement, in tears of joy praising God that I escaped un harmed. I slowly dragged myself to my front door, it was already open? What was happening now? As I walked in, one light went on then another then....

I felt sudden figures grasp me. It wasn't bad, it was my family glad to see me which I expected.

If I ever have to cope with something that difficult again, I won't survive. Now, time to.......
"Ahhhhh!!" Again!? I heard a uproar of laughter, it was my brother. Haha very funny.


The End




Its too long isn't it

That doesn't work anymore

It was a dark cold night I the countryside within Atlanta, the grey clouds flowing through the sky. It was possibly the calmest night in months, but tomorrow wouldn't.

I woke up to the sound of the sterio on my bedside table tuning into the different channels available to me. As I flickered through them, a sudden random lightning bolt shot down in a blink of the eye and struck the bike shed, well that was gone.
My father was calling me down now. Where were we going.......

The forest that I feared the most, you see, there was a rumor, a terrible rumor concerning a vampire within a coffin located the heart of the forest. I knew this was no blasphemy. It was all true I tell you, sure i'd never been there but I know, somewhere out there it lay, all alone in it's lone coffin, waiting for someone to discover it........

To be continued.

This full story would go over the word limit.